以下這片是給你參考的範例。 April 15,2009 Saturday Fine yesterday was my birthday。
I have a birthday party。My friend Jim came to help me。We bought a big cake from a shop。When nwe came back,dinner was ready。
It was delicious and we enjoyed it very much。After dinner,all my friends gave me some beautiful presents。 We had a good time at the party。
We taked,laughed and sang。After my friends left,my parents gave me a special present——a computer!How happy I was! 你按照這個形式寫日記就對了。
這是正宗的。沒錯哦、。